Since there’s (almost) no such thing as a free lunch in Hollywood, how’s about a free sample...?

your screenplay sucks because...

39. You have not made every scene memorable!

41. You haven’t separated the character’s voices!

61. You haven't cut as many “thes” and “thats” as possible!

90. Your sense of entitlement is in overdrive! a.k.a. “Don't fight the notes!”