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“It should be a given. Before you send your script anywhere, get it into Will's hands first. Short and simply put...WORTH EVERY PENNY.”
James Markert

“I wasn't sure what to expect, especially when I saw the name of your book, I thought I was gonna have to re-write the whole damn thing, but your notes went above and beyond my expectations. Thank you so much. I've been writing my whole life, but this is my first screenplay. Some of the points you made were things that I had thought about but simply lacked the experience to confidently change it and feel good about doing so. Others were things I hadn't even thought of.” 
Joe Pinto

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“Will's critiques are empowering and fearless, if you are. If you're looking for a pat on the back and a ticket to the Oscars, this ain't the place. But he knows his stuff, and he WILL MAKE YOU A BETTER WRITER. Thanks for using that red pen!”
Christopher Rogers

“I wanted to thank you again for all the work you put into our script - we've come a long way in our revisions (lot more tension, tied up loose ends, made the dialogue more concise, created more distinct characters, etc.), and I accredit that largely to you.”
Mitch Olson 

“I just took a machete to a 2559 word short story I wrote this summer, and hacked it down to 994 word piece of flash fiction for my beginning fiction writing class using a lot of the stuff you taught me. You're the man.”
Hillary Schoelzel